ROCK OPERA
				(continued)

                                  by

                               Bob Ray

 
                     F I N A L  D R A F T  1.4



© 1996, Bob Ray

 

(Registered by Writers Guild of America, West, Inc., on this date May

19, 1997, registration # 666951.)

 
 
       66 EXT ROAD TO DEL RIO - TOE'S TRUCK DAY/NIGHT              66

 

          Toe, wearing headphones, drives down to Del Rio.  The

          Fuckemos song "Mexico" is playing.  Toe starts to fantasize

          about Cory and he puckers up for a kiss.

 

          FLASHBACK Cory breathing fire into the camera. END FLASHBACK

 

          NIGHT: Toe is blinded by passing headlights.

 

 

       67 EXT TEJANO BAR - PACO'S TRUCK NIGHT                      67

 

          Toe sits on the passenger side of a beat up old pick up

          truck.  A Mexican man with a teardrop prison tattoo named

          Lupe sits next to him and a white guy called Paco stands

          outside the door.  Paco turns the mirror upwards like a table

          and dumps some coke onto it.  He pulls out a box cutter and

          removes the razor.

 

                              PACO

                    Shit, let me tell you what, you

                    shouldn't be fucking around with

                    these goddamn Rohypnols.  That shit

                    makes you crazy.

 

          Paco cuts up a line.

 

                              PACO

                           (continuing)

                    Now, what you need is some good blow.

                    This shit right here.



          Paco rolls up a bill and snorts up a line of coke.

 

                              PACO

                           (continuing)

                    The good shit.

 

          Lupe slides out of the cab and walks over to the mirror.

          Paco leans in and pulls down the sun visor and a joint falls

          out.  He catches the joint and lights it.

 

                              PACO

                           (continuing)

                    We can have the Man here in half an

                    hour, with as much as you need.  Try

                    this shit out.

 

          Lupe snorts up a big line.  Toe walks around to the mirror.

 

                              TOE

                    Hey, I'm just here to get the shit

                    for Jarvis.

 

          Toe huffs up a line.

 

                              PACO

                    Have it your way.  It's like Burger

                    King down here, ese.

 

          Paco laughs.  Toe hands the rolled up bill to Lupe who tears

          into the coke snorting up a ton of the stuff.  Paco takes

          another drag off the joint and breathes a smoke filled sigh.

 

                              PACO

                           (continuing)

                    Lets go have a beer.

 

          Paco hands the joint to Toe.

 

                              TOE

                    Look, I just wanna get the goods and

                    get out.

 

                              PACO

                    Chill out man, as soon as we call the

                    Man, it'll be here.

 

                              TOE

                    Jarvis didn't tell me about the Man.



                              PACO

                    Hey, you don't know the Man, and we

                    don't know you.  You think he's gunna

                    come up here meetin new people before

                    we check you out?  What the fuck?

 

                              TOE

                    I don't know about all this?

 

                              PACO

                    What's not to know?  You want the

                    shit, you'll wait.  Where's the cash?

 

                              TOE

                    When I get the shit, you'll get the

                    cash.

 

                              PACO

                    Let's go have a beer.  I'll call the

                    man.

 

          Toe grumbles.

 

                              LUPE

                           (yelling)

                    Have a fucking beer!

 

 

       68 INT TEJANO BAR NIGHT                                     68

 

          The large doors open to reveal a bright and loud tejano bar.

          Music and lights blast at them as Lupe and Paco escort Toe

          into the bar.  The bar is smoky and has many bright yellow

          and orange neon lights, there is a small tejano band playing

          on the stage.  The bar is relatively empty but there are a

          few people scattered around, it has the weird feeling of a

          Mexican style mafia hang out.

 

          As they walk past the bar, Paco flashes three fingers at the

          bartender.  Lupe, Paco and Toe sit at a table.  Three beers

          arrive and the waitress walks off, Toe sits uncomfortably

          with Paco and Lupe.  Toe keeps looking at the clock.

 

                              LUPE

                    You in some kinda hurry?

 

                              TOE

                    Man, I got shit to do.



                              PACO

                    Chill, It'll be a minute.

 

                              TOE

                    Are you gunna call the Man or what?

 

                              PACO

                    Oh, I'll call the Man.  But you ain't

                    a fag are you, cause the last time

                    the Man met a fag, we were at this

                    party and this dude...

                    and the Man, he had on this bad ass

                    white suit, all stylin and shit, and

                    this fag....

 

          Paco is telling a story of violence and action, his voice

          slowly being drowned out by the music.  The camera zooms in

          to an ECU of his mouth, dissolve into a scene of the Man at

          a party.

 

 

       69 INT  PARTY AT A HOUSE FLASHBACK NIGHT                    69

 

          FLASHBACK

 

          Some GUY is standing next to the Man and his cigar keeps

          burning the Man's ass.

 

                              PACO (O.S.)

                    ...The Man's shit is all fucked up.

                    He's all on crutches and can't feel

                    his legs...

 

          The cigar smoker Guy notices the Man's ass on fire and he

          tries to pat out the fire.

 

                              THE MAN

                    Back off faggot!  I'm a homophobe!

 

          The Man sees that his ass is on fire and starts to beats the

          shit out of the other guy.  He beats the other guy down with

          his gold plated crutches, using them like a ninja.

 

                              PACO (O.S.)

                    But the real shit was later. After

                    everyone left, the Man waited outside

                    and fucked that guy up for real.



       70 EXT  PARTY AT A HOUSE FLASHBACK NIGHT                    70

 

          The Man beating the hell out of the other guy.  Lupe and Paco

          are sitting on the truck, waiting.  The Man aims a crutch at

          the other guy and fires it like a shotgun, shooting him in

          the leg.  The Man falls down from the kick of the crutch-gun.

 

                              THE MAN

                    How do you like that, you fucking

                    gimp?!  Get up and walk now you piece

                    of shit!

 

          END FLASHBACK

 

 

       71 EXT ALLEYWAY DEL RIO NIGHT                               71

 

          Ned and Chicken toss their equipment into their beaten up old

          van.  Ned pulls out the one hitter, loads it, and passes it

          to Chicken.  They sit in the van doorway and listen to Burtis

          arguing with the door guy.  Burtis waves the money in his

          face and bounces around.

 

                              BURTIS

                    Thirteen bucks?  This crap won't even

                    pay for the gas it cost to get down

                    here.

 

          Chicken smokes the hit, sucking in the ashes and then trying

          to spit them out.

 

                              DOORGUY

                    Look, no one came out to see you

                    guys.  Not one person.  Maybe if more

                    people come out later on tonight...

 

          Ned reloads the one hitter, and holds it up to display it

          before Chicken.

 

                              NED

                    Observe.

 

          Ned sucks the hit and shoots out the ashes onto the ground.

 

                              NED

                           (continuing)

                    You gotta watch the reflection of the

                    ember in the lighter and spit it out

                    before it ashes.



                              CHICKEN

                    Let me try again.

 

          Chicken loads up another hit.  Chicken smokes the hit and

          shoots out the still burning ember.

 

                              NED

                    You spit it out too soon.  Wait til

                    the weed stops burning.

 

                              CHICKEN

                    Lemme try again.

 

          Ned hands the one hitter to Chicken and he loads up another

          hit.  Ned walks over to the other side of the alley.

 

                              BURTIS

                    This is fucked up.

 

                              DOORGUY

                    Hey, be thankful we're giving you

                    free beer.

 

                              BURTIS

                    Free beer?  Fuck yeah, we can drink

                    a lot of free beer.

 

          Burtis follows the doorguy back into the club.  Chicken sucks

          the hit and gets up and walks toward the door.

 

                              CHICKEN

                    I heard that.  Free beer.

 

                              NED

                    Hey, grab that box of porn videos we

                    got from that porn shop show.  Maybe

                    we can sell some for gas money.

 

                              CHICKEN

                    Dude, we're keeping those.

 

                              NED

                    Just sell a few, so we can buy gas.

                    Jesus christ, we got sixty-three

                    tapes.

 

          Ned steps up next to the closed door of another club and

          begins to relieve himself.  Chicken finds a few tapes that he

          can part with and goes inside.



       72 INT TEJANO BAR NIGHT                                     72

 

          Paco and Lupe are laughing.  Toe is petrified in a drug

          induced daze.  Paco kicks the bottom of the table and the

          beers bounce around.

 

                              PACO

                    Boom!

 

          The loud banging noise snaps Toe out of his trance.  Paco and

          Lupe laugh.  Toe takes a gulp of his beer.

 

                              PACO

                           (continuing)

                    Then Lupe started kicking him.  Right

                    in the fucking peanuts.  You can just

                    call that old boy "the man with the

                    inverted nut sack".

 

                              TOE

                    You fucked that guy up, huh, Loopy?

 

          Paco finishes his beer.  Lupe takes a gulp of his beer.

 

                              PACO

                    Aw, shit,lemme go call up the boss.

 

          Paco gets up and goes to the pay phone in the bathroom.

          There is a moment of awkward silence.

 

                              TOE

                    Say Loopy--

 

          Lupe snaps and kicks Toe's chair.  Toe falls out of his chair

          and onto the ground.

 

                              LUPE

                    What the fuck's your problem?!

 

          Lupe stands and kicks at Toe.  Toe is squirming back and down

          the hall toward the exit as Lupe keeps trying to kick at him.

 

                              TOE

                    Chill out Loopy, it's cool, it's

                    cool.

 

                              LUPE

                    My name's Lupe. Loo-pay,

                    motherfucker!

 

          Toe raises his hands up as if surrendering.



                              LUPE

                           (continuing)

                    You wanna fucking square off?  You

                    fucking bitch, get up bitch let's

                    fucking go.

 

          Lupe kicks at Toe.

 

                              LUPE

                           (continuing)

                    Say my name, bitch!  LOO-PAY!!  Say

                    it!  Say it!!

 

          Lupe hovers above Toe who is still on the ground near the

          exit.  Lupe picks up an empty beer bottle and breaks it on

          the wall.

 

                              LUPE

                           (continuing)

                    Get the fuck up!

 

          Toe stands up slowly, trying not to antagonize Lupe.  Lupe

          shoves Toe through the exit.

 

 

       73 EXT ALLEYWAY DEL RIO NIGHT                               73

 

          Ned is standing outside the back door pissing in the alley

          way.  Suddenly, the door comes tearing open and nails Ned.

          Ned slams into the wall that he is facing and pisses all over

          himself as Toe hits the ground.  Lupe steps into the doorway

          hovering above Toe with broken beer bottle in hand.

 

                              NED

                    What the FUCK?!

 

          Ned mule-kicks the door and it slams shut.  The door crashes

          into Lupe.  Lupe's hand bounces off the door and the broken

          bottle stabs into his neck.  Lupe staggers back, bleeding

          profusely.  Ned spins around to see Toe sprawled out on the

          dirt alley-way before him.

 

                              NED

                           (continuing)

                    Hey motherfucker!

 

          Ned marches toward Toe, zipping up his pants.  Toe

          frantically scurries to his feet.  Slipping in the loose

          dirt, he bolts off down the alley in a cloud of dust.



                              NED

                           (continuing)

                    You'd better run, you pussy!

 

          Ned lunges toward Toe, trying to grab him.  The door bursts

          back open and Ned freezes.  He whips his head around to see

          a blood covered Lupe standing in the doorway, swaying from

          side to side.  Lupe's face is pale and covered in blood.  His

          left hand is pressed into his neck, desperately trying to

          keep his pipes and veins from falling out of the gaping wound

          in his throat.  His right hand reaches into his coat and

          yanks out a pistol.  The gun gleams in Ned's eyes as he

          backpedals.

 

          Lupe fires off a round.  Ned screams in pain as he grabs his

          face and bellyflops face down in the dirt, sending up a cloud

          of dust.  The force of the shot makes Lupe slip on the bloody

          tile beneath his feet.  He begins to fall and catches himself

          with his elbow on the wall.

 

          Ned is writhing in pain on the ground as Toe starts to zig-

          zag, juking the bullets as he runs down the alleyway.  Lupe

          unloads another round as his legs give out and he slides down

          to the floor, leaving a slug-like trail of blood on the

          inside of the door.

 

          Lupe, lying on his stomach and covered in blood, continues to

          shoot.  Lupe's vision is bloodied and blurry, he squints but

          he can barely see Toe, way down the road, climbing into his

          pick up truck.  Lupe struggles to hold the pistol upright, he

          aims and fires.

 

          Toe fumbles with the keys and stabs them into the ignition,

          he spins the keys, but nothing happens.  Toe pops the e-brake

          and the truck starts to roll backwards down the hill toward

          Lupe, who shoots again.  Toe hops out and pushes the vehicle,

          giving it a little boost.  He jumps back in, slams it into

          reverse, and pops the clutch, cranking the car to life with

          a sputter and a wheeze.  Toe stomps the brakes and the truck

          slides to a stop just inches in front of Ned.

 

          Lupe blasts out another shot as Ned reaches his bloody hand

          up and grabs the exhaust pipe, trying to pull himself up.

          Toe grinds the car into first gear and slams the gas pedal,

          shooting debris in Ned's face as he peels out.  Ned is

          dragged for about seven feet before the exhaust pipe breaks

          off and slides to a stop in the dust.



          Lupe arm is near limp, and he fires his next three shots

          directly into the dirt only a few feet in front of him.

 

          Suddenly, Lupe's body convulses as he tries to fire his

          already empty handgun, his arm jerks up as he squeezes the

          trigger.  He exhales a last moan into the dirt as life

          escapes him and he goes limp again.

 

                              PACO

                    Holy Christ!

 

          Paco runs over to Ned and starts to beat the shit out of him.

          As Toe's truck driving past the front of the club, he sees

          the Man walking across the street with a bowling bag in his

          hand.  Toe turns the wheel and yanks the e-brake and slides

          out of control, crashing into the Man.  Toe's truck

          sandwiches the Man in between the pickup and a parked car.

 

          The bowling bag flies into the bed of the truck as the Man

          coughs up blood.  Toe stomps the gas, the tires spin but it

          doesn't move.  The truck is hung up on the other car. White

          smoke is pouring up from the spinning tires as the Man

          reaches for his bag.  Toe is grinding the gears in forward

          and reverse, trying to break free of the other car.  The Man

          reaches his bag and unzips it, he pulls out a chrome

          derringer and aims it at Toe.  At that moment, Toe breaks

          free from the other vehicle and peels out.  He ducks down in

          the cab to dodge the bullets.  The Man pulls the trigger and

          a small flame comes out of the derringer lighter.

 

 

       74 EXT NEIGHBORHOOD STREET - JARVIS'S VEHICLE NIGHT         74

 

          Jarvis is driving along in his truck we can hear his police

          scanner going off in the background.  He picks up his car

          phone and punches in some numbers. The phone starts to ring.

          Jarvis turns down the police scanner.

 

 

       75 INT ROSS'S LIVING ROOM NIGHT                             75

 

          Ron answers the portable phone.

 

                              RON

                    Hello.

 

          Ron starts to take a bong hit.



                              JARVIS (PHONE)

                    Ross.

 

          Ron whimpers as he nearly coughs out the bong hit making a

          noise that sounds like:

 

                              RON

                    Uh-huh.

 

          Ron turns the receiver so that the mouthpiece is away from

          his mouth.

 

                              JARVIS (PHONE)

                    I'm coming over to pick up the money.

                    I'll be there in an hour.

 

          Ron is doing his best to fight off the cough and listen to

          the phone at the same time.

 

                              JARVIS (PHONE)

                           (continuing)

                    Have the shit ready this time.

 

          Jarvis hangs up the phone and Ron starts coughing up a storm.

 

 

       76 EXT  PAYPHONE NIGHT                                      76

 

          Paco's bloody finger punches out some numbers. Paco is on the

          brink of tears. His truck is behind him with the door open

          and the engine running. Ned is in the floorboard of the

          truck, covered in blood. Paco starts crying.

 

 

       77 INT  PACO'S MOM'S HOUSE FLASHBACK DAY                    77

 

          Paco's cries turn into coughs as he belches out smoke.  Paco

          and Lupe are in a house that was fancy back in the seventies.

          Lupe is rummaging around and Paco is on the phone.  Paco

          clears his throat.

 

                              PACO

                           (into the phone)

                    You know I'd bring it up there to you

                    but my  probation officer won't let

                    me leave the county.

 

          Lupe is messing shit up.



                              PACO

                           (continuing; to Lupe)

                    Hey, cut it out.  You're gunna fuck

                    up all my mom's shit.

 

                              JARVIS (O.S.)

                    Listen...

 

                              PACO

                    Sorry, Lupe's messin up all my mom's

                    shit.  Why don't you just send ol Tad

                    down, he's good for some laughs.

 

                              JARVIS (O.S.)

                    That fuckin moron's under house

                    arrest for jerkin off in a laundry

                    mat.

 

                              PACO

                    What the hell is up with that?  I

                    mean sure, it's cheaper than a

                    hooker, but christ.

 

                              JARVIS (O.S.)

                    You know what?  I got someone right

                    here.  He's fuckin green and a little

                    stupid, but he's good.  He can be

                    there by eight thirty.

 

                              PACO

                    Eight thirty's good.  You know where,

                    Tejano Tejas.

 

                              JARVIS (O.S.)

                    He'll be drivin a fucked up eye-

                    shitzu pickup... name's Toe.

 

                              PACO

                    Toe huh?  He's not bringin Larry or

                    Shemp is he?  Curly's alright, but

                    fuck that Curly Joe dude.  I mean--

 

                              JARVIS (O.S.)

                    I don't got time for your shit, Paco,

                    my boy will be there at eight thirty.

 

          Paco hangs up the phone and puffs on the joint.



                              LUPE

                    So Jarvis is sending someone down?

 

                              PACO

                    Yeah, some stooge named Toe.

 

          Lupe walks up to Paco and produces a pistol from behind his

          back.

 

                              LUPE

                    Lets take his fuckin money and stick

                    him in a ditch somewhere.

 

                              PACO

                    Jesus fucking Christ.  Where the hell

                    did you get that?

 

                              LUPE

                    In that drawer.

 

          Lupe points the gun at the drawer.

 

                              PACO

                    That's my mom's teargas gun.  Put it

                    back.  Man, she'd whup my ass if she

                    found out I was messin with that.

 

          Paco starts to get up and Lupe pushes him back into the sofa.

 

                              PACO

                           (continuing; laughing)

                    You fucker.

 

                              LUPE

                           (imitating Paco's mom)

                    Now Paco, are you smoking weed up

                    there?  I smell weed.  I've got my

                    gun.

 

                              PACO

                    Gimme that.

 

          Paco gets up and grabs at the gun.  Lupe pulls it out of

          reach.

 

                              PACO

                           (continuing)

                    Is that thing loaded?



          Lupe tosses the gun to Paco.

 

                              LUPE

                    Man, the safety's on.  It's just tear

                    gas anyway.

 

          Paco hands Lupe the joint and inspects the gun.

 

                              PACO

                    This things loaded.  Put this back

                    where you found it.  If my mom found

                    out we were messing with that, I'd be

                    in deep shit.

 

          Paco hands the gun to Lupe and he walks over to the drawer.

 

                              LUPE

                    You know what we should do?  Just

                    fuck with that Toe dude.  Scare him

                    a little.  Tell him crazy stories.

                    Give him something to talk about.

 

 

       78 INT  TEJANO BAR, PAY PHONE FLASHBACK NIGHT               78

 

          Paco is talking on the pay phone.

 

                              PACO

                           (laughing)

                    Oh, you're gunna bust up when you see

                    this shit.  I gave Lupe one of those

                    tear drop prison tattoos.  And we

                    told him your crutches were made of

                    gold and they were shotguns.  This

                    dude is eating it up.

 

                              THE MAN (O.S.)

                    No shit, huh?  Well I'm ready to do

                    this whenever you guys are.

 

                              PACO

                    You got all the pills in that bowling

                    bag right?

 

                              THE MAN

                    Yeah, it's all here.



                              PACO

                    Alright.  Now you come in strutting,

                    like you own the place.

 

                              THE MAN

                    Right.  I'm the bad ass.  I am The

                    Man.  You guys couldn't think of

                    anything better than The Man?

 

                              PACO

                    Hey, man, Lupe thought of that one.

                    And he was high.  It's better than

                    Dwayne.

 

                              THE MAN

                    Yeah, but I coulda been One Eyed

                    Charlie or Frankie Two Toes or

                    something mean sounding like that.

 

                              PACO

                    Hey, listen here Three Eyed Frankie

                    Big Toe, just bring in the shit and

                    act like a bad ass.  Can you do that?

 

                              THE MAN

                    When do you want me?

 

                              PACO

                    Come in right now.  Use the front

                    door and make a grand entrance.

 

                              THE MAN

                    Alright, I'll see you on the inside.

 

          Paco hears gunshots.  He runs to the back door and finds

          blood everywhere. He opens up the door and Lupe is lying dead

          on the ground.

 

                              PACO

                           (sobbing)

                    Holy christ!

 

          Paco sees Ned writhing around.  Paco grabs the exhaust pipe

          and starts to beat the shit out of Ned.

 

          END FLASHBACK



       79 EXT GAS STATION NIGHT                                    79

 

          Toe pulls into a closed down gas station.  Toe hops out and

          grabs the bowling bag.  The bag spills and there are Rohypnol

          packages everywhere.  Toe stuffs the pills back into the bag

          and tosses it into the cab.  Toe scrounges up all his change

          and loads up a pay phone and punches in some numbers.

 

 

       80 EXT  PAYPHONE NIGHT                                      80

 

          Paco's crying on the phone as it rings, Ned is bloody and

          passed out in the truck in the background.

 

                              PACO

                           (sobbing)

                    Oh my fucking god.

 

 

       81 INT  ROSS' LIVING ROOM NIGHT                             81

 

          The phone is ringing as Ross walks out of the bathroom, the

          toilet can be HEARD flushing in the background.  Ron is laid

          out on the couch, the phone is next to him.

 

                              ROSS

                    You gunna get that?

 

          Ross walks over and snatches up the phone from next to Ron.

 

                              ROSS

                           (continuing)

                    Hello.

 

                              TOE

                    Hey Ross, it's Toe.  Listen, I'm on

                    a payphone and it's long distance, so

                    I don't have long.

 

                              ROSS

                    What's up?

 

 

       82 EXT ROSS'S HOUSE - JARVIS'S VEHICLE NIGHT                82

 

          Jarvis is driving his truck and his cell phone starts to

          RING.  Jarvis answers the cell phone.

 

                              JARVIS

                    Yeah.



                              PACO (PHONE)

                           (screaming & crying)

                    Goddamnit, what the fuck did you do?

                    You piece of fucking shit, sending

                    some crazy down here.

 

                              JARVIS

                    Paco?  Is that you?  What the hell

                    are you crying about?

 

                              PACO (PHONE)

                    You double crossed the wrong man,

                    motherfucker!

 

                              JARVIS

                    Paco!  What the fuck is going on?

 

                              PACO (PHONE)

                           (screaming)

                    Your boy fucked up the job, I can't

                    be fucking killed.  Don't you know

                    that?

 

                              JARVIS

                    What the fuck happened down there?

                    Where are my goddamn drugs?

 

                              PACO (PHONE)

                    What happened?  What the fuck

                    happened?  Lupe and Dwayne are dead.

                    That's what the fuck happened.  That

                    fucking psycho went ape shit.  I

                    fucked up his partner, the son of a

                    bitch.

 

                              JARVIS

                    Paco?  What the hell are you talking

                    about?

 

                              PACO (PHONE)

                           (sobbing)

                    Toe slashed Lupe's fucking throat.

 

                              JARVIS

                    Holy shit.



                              PACO (PHONE)

                           (sobbing)

                    He ran over Dwayne with his truck.

                    He's got the pills, the money....

 

                              JARVIS

                    That piece of shit.  Fuck, fuck,

                    fuck... when did all this happen?

 

          Paco takes a deep breath and regains his composure.

 

                              PACO (PHONE)

                    Half hour ago.  I'm on my way up.  If

                    I find out you're involved, I'll

                    fucking---

 

          He pulls over to the side of the road, a couple of houses

          down the street from Ross's house.  His police scanner is

          picking up Ross's conversation with Toe.

 

 

                    Wait a second.  Just fucking hold on.

 

          Jarvis turns up the scanner.

 

                              TOE (SCANNER)

                    Check it out, I just came into a

                    shitload of Rohypnols.  Like 500 or

                    so.  I gotta unload them as soon as

                    I get back to Austin.  Interested?

 

                              JARVIS

                    Paco, listen to this shit.  It's my

                    scanner.  The dumbass is using a

                    portable phone.

 

          Jarvis holds the phone up to the police scanner.

 

                              ROSS (SCANNER)

                    Hell yeah.  How much you sellin em

                    for?

 

                              TOE (SCANNER)

                    Christ, I don't know.  How's 300

                    bucks sound?

 

                              ROSS (SCANNER)

                    Sounds like a deal.



                              TOE (SCANNER)

                    Kick ass.  We gotta do this quick,

                    I'm in a big ass hurry.  I don't have

                    time to swing by your house, so

                    you'll have to meet me down at the

                    railroad tracks on third street at

                    1:30.

 

                              ROSS (SCANNER)

                    Third street.  Right.

 

          Ross hangs up the phone.

 

                              JARVIS

                    Paco, you get up here.  I know what

                    in the hell's going on.  That little

                    weasel has fucked the both of us.

 

          Jarvis hangs up the phone.  Jarvis sees ROSS run out of his

          house and toss a brown paper bag into the trunk of his car.

          Ross runs back into the house.

 

 

       83 EXT GAS STATION NIGHT                                    83

 

          Toe scrounges up all the remaining change in his ashtray.  He

          stuffs a fistful of quarters into the pay phone and punches

          out a bunch of numbers.  An answering machine picks up.

 

                              ANSWERING MACHINE

                    Pigpoke Global Headquarters here,

                    leave a message, jackass.  Wait,

                    before that, check out this new song

                    I recorded on the four track.

 

          A song from the one-man band tapes starts up and plays, the

          machine finally beeps.

 

                              TOE

                    Hey, Bo.  This is Toe.  Crazy shit is

                    going down.  I think Jarvis tried to

                    set me up for some kind of hit or

                    something.  We gotta hit the road

                    tonight.  You guys get all our

                    equipment together.  I'm on my way

                    back into--

 

          The answering machine cuts off.



                              TOE

                           (continuing)

                    Shit!

 

          Toe searches his truck for more change.  There is none.  He

          finds a gum ball machine and beats it up, stealing all the

          coins.  Toe, chewing gum, reloads the pay phone and punches

          out the numbers again.

 

                              ANSWERING MACHINE

                    Pigpoke Global Headquarters here,

                    leave a message, jackass.  Wait,

                    before that, check out this new song

                    I recorded on the four track.

 

          A song from the one-man band tapes starts up and plays, the

          machine finally beeps.

 

                              TOE

                           (talking fast)

                    Listen.  Just have everything ready

                    by two o'clock.  We have gotta hit

                    the road tonight.  I'll be there with

                    the truck at two.  Make sure you got

                    everything.  We don't have time to

                    mess around this is urgen--.

 

                                                   CUT TO:

 

          A shot of the answering machine cutting Toe off, again.

 

 

       84 EXT DROP SITE NIGHT                                      84

 

          Start off on Ross's face in his car, waiting for the drug

          drop.  Pull back to reveal that he's stuffed down on the

          floorboard, all taped up with packing tape.  Jarvis sits in

          the driver's seat lighting a cigarette with the car lighter.

 

                              JARVIS

                    You're not too bright are you?  You

                    knew I was coming over to get my

                    money.  I just fucking talked to you.

                    What, did you think I was too stupid

                    to figure it out?  I know ya'll are

                    friends, you and Toe.  And doing

                    business on a portable phone.  How

                    fucking stupid are you?  Worthless

                    pill heads.



          Jarvis takes a big drag off his cigarette.

 

                              JARVIS

                           (continuing)

                    I should burn your fuckin eyes out

                    for tryin to fuck me over.  And that

                    ain't the half of what I'm gunna do

                    to Toe when he shows up.

 

          Jarvis sighs and looks around.  Ross whimpers.

 

                              JARVIS

                           (continuing)

                    What's that?  I can't fucking hear

                    you.

 

          Jarvis flicks his cigarette at Ross and it hits him in the

          head.

 

                              JARVIS

                           (continuing; exhaling)

                    Alright, you better hope this piece

                    of shit has a big trunk.

 

          Jarvis hops out and walks around to the back of the car.

          Ross whines as Jarvis opens the trunk.

 

                              JARVIS

                           (continuing)

                    Plenty of room for a shitbag like

                    you.  What ya got here, a sack lunch?

 

          Jarvis picks up the bag of cash and inspects it.

 

                              JARVIS

                           (continuing)

                    Three hundred bucks.  You were going

                    behind my back to fuck me to save

                    fifty bucks?

 

          Ross squirms around, trying to free himself.  He uses an

          untaped finger to locate a plastic butter knife lying amidst

          the fast food trash on the floor.  He starts sawing on the

          tape on his wrists.  Jarvis walks around to the passenger

          side and opens the door.

 

                              JARVIS

                           (continuing)

                    Alright bitch, let's go.



          Jarvis leans in to pick up Ross and Ross slices his eye with

          the serrated plastic butter knife.  Blood flies and Jarvis

          screams in agony as he recoils back hitting his head on the

          roof of the car.  He grabs at his bleeding eye hole and drops

          the sack of cash.

 

                              JARVIS

                           (continuing;

                            screaming)

                    You goddamn shit!!

 

          Jarvis reaches for his brass knuckle-knife.  Ross slices the

          back of Jarvis's hand and Jarvis drops the knife, screaming

          again.  Ross lunges forward and knocks Jarvis back, they both

          fall to the ground.

 

          Ross slices right through the tape on his legs and hops up.

          Ross holds Jarvis at bay with the plastic knife and Jarvis

          jumps up.  The hillbilly knife lies between them, they both

          see it, Jarvis makes a move for it.  Ross tries to stomp on

          Jarvis's hand as he grabs for the knife, but Ross ends up

          kicking the knife underneath the car.  Jarvis dives on the

          ground and stretches for the knife.  Ross stabs the plastic

          butter knife into Jarvis's back and it breaks off.  Jarvis

          wails in agony.

 

          Ross looks at the broken handle.  Jarvis jumps up, flailing

          wildly, he knocks Ross back.  Jarvis reaches for the broken

          plastic knife in his back.  Ross dives at Jarvis and they

          wrestle and fight.  They end up fighting one another all over

          the place.  The fight leads them down onto the old bridge as

          a train storms by.

 

          Toe, chewing gum, pulls up in his truck with the headlights

          off.  No one is around the car and the trunk is wide open.

          Toe pulls the e-brake, leaves the truck running, and hops

          out.  Gumballs pour out of the cab.  Toe inspects the site,

          looking around for Ross.

 

                              TOE

                    Ross.

 

          Toe looks inside the car for Ross, he checks out the open

          trunk and then sees the cash in a bag on the ground.  Toe

          gathers up all the loot and looks around.  In the distance he

          can see Ross and Jarvis fighting.  Toe runs back to his truck

          and tosses the bag in the passenger window.  Toe runs around

          his vehicle and opens up the door.  Gumballs fall out of the

          car and some Pigpoke stickers as well.



          Toe hops in and slams the truck into gear and hauls ass out

          of there.

 

 

       85 INT TOE'S HOUSE, BACK ROOM NIGHT                         85

 

          Mic, Trav, and Bo sit around the back room.  Slow motion shot

          of Bo as he loads a triple hit of nitrous oxide into a

          balloon and inhales it.  As he exhales, he sinks back into

          the chair and slide off onto the floor.  At the point where

          he hits the floor, the Cherubs song "Sinatras" starts up.

          Slow motion from Bo's p.o.v. as Toe comes busting onto the

          scene.  Toe (chewing gum)is freaking out and screaming, but

          only the music can be heard.

 

 

       86 EXT DROP SITE NIGHT                                      86

 

          Ross and Jarvis pop back onto the scene, still fighting.

          They fight all over the place and end up next to the vehicle.

          Ross reaches in the trunk and grabs the tire iron.  Ross

          slams the hood of the trunk down onto Jarvis and he collapses

          into the trunk.  Ross stuffs his legs in and slams the trunk

          shut.

 

 

       87 INT TOE'S HOUSE, BACK ROOM NIGHT                         87

 

          Toe come running back into the room.

 

                              TOE

                    Jesus Christ, let's fucking go!

 

          Toe spits out the gum.

 

                              TOE

                           (continuing)

                    Come on, I'm not fucking around.

 

          Toe runs around franticly.  He sees that none of the

          equipment has been packed up.  He looks around and everyone's

          still high and drunk and doing whip-its.

 

                              TOE

                           (continuing)

                    What the hell?!  Get off your asses.

                    We gotta get on the road, NOW!



          Mic and Trav get up and start to help Toe gather up all the

          equipment.

 

                              TRAV

                    What's the rush?  Stu brought over a

                    shitload of whipits.  He was waiting

                    for his half pound.

 

                              TOE

                    What's the fucking rush?!  I just

                    ripped off half a dozen of the

                    meanest sons of bitches in Texas.

                    That's the fucking rush.

 

          Toe runs off into another room and grabs his guitar.  Bo sits

          dumbfounded by the nitrous, he watches Toe, Trav, and Mic.

          Toe runs outside with his guitar.

 

 

       88 EXT TOE'S HOUSE, ROSS'S CAR NIGHT                        88

 

          Ross pulls up, he's covered in blood.  He stops up the street

          from Toe's house and can see them loading up their truck.

          Jarvis is screaming out death threats as he kicks the back

          seat from inside the trunk of the car.  Ross gets out of the

          vehicle and begins to walk toward the house.

 

 

       89 EXT TOE'S HOUSE, PACO'S TRUCK NIGHT                      89

 

          Paco and Ned sit in the front seat of his pickup, they are

          both covered in blood.  Ned is passed out.  Paco has a metal

          pipe sitting in his lap.

 

                              PACO

                    Which house is it?

 

          Ned doesn't respond and Paco pokes his face with the pipe.

 

                              PACO

                           (continuing)

                    Which one.

 

          Ned points out the window, at nothing in particular.

 

                              PACO

                           (continuing)

                    No shit?



          Paco sees Ross walking up to the vehicle, he rubs his

          bloodshot eyes.  His vision is blurry and he thinks Ross is

          Toe.

 

                              PACO

                           (continuing)

                    Is that the piece of shit right there?

 

          Paco screeches to a halt and jumps out of the car.

 

                              PACO

                           (continuing; yelling)

                    Hey, mutherfucker!

 

          Ross turns around.  Paco points the tear gas gun at him.

          Ross dives on the ground and rolls, trying to avoid getting

          shot.  Paco realizes that it's not Toe and starts laughing.

          Ross starts running.

 

                              PACO

                           (continuing)

                    Run you piece of shit!

 

          Paco heads for the front door of Toe's house.

 

 

       90 INT TOE'S HOUSE, KITCHEN NIGHT                           90

 

          Mic dumps a bunch of cymbals into the truck and runs back in

          the house.  He sees Toe, carrying a milk crate full of cords

          and pedals.

 

                              TOE

                    This is the last of it.

 

          Toe hands the crate to Mic.

 

                              MIC

                    Someone's out there flashing a gun.

 

                              TOE

                    Oh, fuck.  Where's Bo at?

 

                              MIC

                    I guess he's still in there.

 

          Mic points to the back room.  They see someone walk in front

          of the window and toe slinks into the living room and grabs

          the Pigpoke banner and hands it to Mic.



                              TOE

                    Here, we can't forget this.

 

          The front door opens.

 

                              MIC

                    Oh, shit.

 

          Mic slips out the back door and Toe slides into the back

          room.  Toe finds Bo passed out in the corner.  Paco enters

          the house.  Toe slaps Bo around and can't wake him up.  Paco

          is approaching.  Toe picks up Bo and slides him out of the

          window.  Paco is at the door of the room as we see Toe's feet

          disappear out the window.

 

 

       91 EXT  TOE'S HOUSE, ROSS'S CAR NIGHT                       91

 

          The trunk of Ross's car comes flying open and a bloody Jarvis

          leaps out.

 

 

       92 INT  TOE'S HOUSE, FRONT ROOM NEAR DAWN                   92

 

          Jarvis makes his way into the front door, walks through the

          living room and wanders in to the front room.  He walks

          across the room to the door on the other side.  He listens as

          he takes off his belt and prepares to enter.

 

 

       93 INT  TOE'S HOUSE, BACK ROOM NEAR DAWN                    93

 

          Paco listens at the door.  He hears a toilet flushing and

          Paco busts open the door.

 

 

       94 INT  TOE'S HOUSE, BATHROOM NEAR DAWN                     94

 

          Jarvis hears the toilet flush and busts open the door with

          his belt slashing through the air.  The leather strap slaps

          Paco in the face and Paco drops the metal pipe into the

          toilet.  Stu sees Paco and Jarvis standing in front of him.

          He punches both of them in the face and they fall back.

          Jarvis stumbles into the front room and Paco steps back into

          the back room.  Stu moves in like a rabid bulldog, he kicks

          Jarvis and he drops the belt and falls down.  Stu then

          attacks Paco with rapid punches to the face.  As Paco is

          backing up, he slips on one of the empty nitrous canisters

          rolling around the floor.



          Jarvis  grabs a nearby baseball bat and charges at Stu.  Stu

          turns and blocks the bat with his forearm.  Stu lays into

          Jarvis with a mighty punch and they fall back into the front

          room and continue to fight.  Paco crawls out into the kitchen.

 

 

       95 EXT  TOE'S HOUSE, TOE'S TRUCK NEAR DAWN                  95

 

          Toe jumps in the truck.  Gum balls roll off the seat and onto

          the ground.  Bo's feet can be seen sticking out of the bed of

          the truck.  Toe puts it in neutral and Trav and Mic push the

          car out of the drive.  Toe pops the clutch and the vehicle

          makes a loud grinding noise, but doesn't start.

 

 

       96 INT  TOE'S HOUSE, KITCHEN NEAR DAWN                      96

 

          Paco hears the noise and looks out the window.  He sees the

          boys trying to start the truck.

 

 

       97 EXT  TOE'S HOUSE, PACO'S TRUCK NEAR DAWN                 97

 

          Ned searches for the keys.  He finds a carburetor and some

          pipes.  Ned dumps all the weed out of the dug out and into

          his hand.  He picks up a half inch pipe and crams the weed

          into it.  He's really packing the weed in there.

 

 

       98 INT  TOE'S HOUSE NEAR DAWN                               98

 

          Paco runs for the front door.

 

 

       99 EXT  TOE'S HOUSE NEAR DAWN                               99

 

          The Pigpoke boys give their truck another push. Toe gets the

          car started and they haul ass.  The house fight can be heard

          as they drive off screen, we can hear and see flashes from

          the guns being fired inside.

 

          Paco comes running out of the house with the keys in his hand

          and he runs after the Cricket.  He turns back and runs to his

          pickup.



      100 EXT  TOE'S HOUSE, PACO'S TRUCK NEAR DAWN                 100

 

          Ned tweaks the rear view mirror so he can see Paco running

          toward the truck.   He strikes up the lighter and burns the

          ball of weed to a glowing ember.  As Paco approaches the

          truck, Ned sits up in the front seat and shoots the burning

          ball of weed like a giant spitwad.  The ball explodes in

          Paco's face and he recoils back.  He lets go of the keys and

          grabs at his face, falling to his knees.  The keys fly in

          through the window and Ned catches them.  Ned pushes open the

          front door and knocks Paco in the head.  Paco collapses, out

          cold.  Ned starts up the truck, tunes in the radio to a good

          song and throws it into gear.

 

 

      101 EXT NEIGHBORHOOD ROAD - TOE'S TRUCK DAWN                 101

 

          Pigpoke, all of them chewing gum, drives off into the

          sunrise.  Bo sits up in the bed, looking confused.  They

          drive past Ross who's still running away from the shootout.

          Toe tosses the bag of pills out to Ross as they pass him and

          it busts open in front of him.

 

                              ROSS

                    Fuck yeah!

 

                                                   FADE OUT:

 

          ROLL CREDITS

 

 

      102 INT  TOE'S LIVING ROOM DAWN                              102

 

          Show Stu as victorious from the fight.  Jarvis is sprawled

          out on the floor and Stu takes a bong hit, coughing out the

          smoke.

 

                              STU

                    Goddamn, that was fucked up.

 

                                                   FADE OUT; THE END.